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രണ്ടു ബര്ത്തുകളായിരുന്നു നമുക്കിടയിലെ ദൂരം ഒരിക്കലും കൂടിച്ചേരാത്ത തിരുപ്പതിയിലോ ഗുണ്ടൂരിലോ ഉറക്കത്തിലും ഞാനറിഞ്ഞു ഇനിയിപ്പോള് മുതല് നിന്നെ
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രണ്ടു ബര്ത്തുകളായിരുന്നു നമുക്കിടയിലെ ദൂരം ഒരിക്കലും കൂടിച്ചേരാത്ത തിരുപ്പതിയിലോ ഗുണ്ടൂരിലോ ഉറക്കത്തിലും ഞാനറിഞ്ഞു ഇനിയിപ്പോള് മുതല് നിന്നെ
ജയേഷ്
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wow amazing small poem, but a train is a wonderful them and u got nothin more to stay and say
thanks friend....kututhal enikku thonniyilla...sorry
It looks like a mini-story. Not worth-to-be-as-a-poem . Story is good. And, the extremely nice pictorisation needs Kudos to he Artist who drew the picture. I would like to know the artist's name and wish to apreciate him personally.
Kaviam@rediffmail.com
And we have to Amaze how Shri.Jayesh turned a story to look like a poem!!!!
Which will suit this friend, Poem/Story?? think he himself is confused!!!!!!!!!
ha..ha...nice comment sir.
Any Art has to be in general life pattern touching the common and everybody, but should simultenously a measured minimum distance should be kept from the same.
The internet-facility along with wide print job availabilities, have devalued the general creative section of every language , particularly Malayalam.
The check posts like M Krishnan Nair made a control over the dumping of low value products. That sad demise has now a thunder bolt for Malayalam.
And, obviously, now the judgement on a literary product is biased. If somebody doesnot like anyone coming up differently, its easy to devalue his work without any siewing system (I mean editing). Thats the worst of Net-Publishing. now Every page is full with as-they-wish comments. Editor is free of any harms!!
It should change. Whatever comments posted should strictly be monitored and screened before appearing in page. The single dirty/deliberate comment can totally throw a writer out of track!! So Editor should take this matter with extreme importance and stop such kind of irresponsible comments being appeared.